If Terra in any way looks like a boy to you in that first panel, you watch too much bishounen animu. I say the girl looks like a girl, darn it.
Don't ask me where Terra is. The page didn't have enough room for her position on the last panel, and it would've just looked stupid to have her ear and a few strands of hair poking out as an afterthought. But next up is a 2 page spread, so I should have plenty of room there. Not to mention a real background.
There are several key villains of equal importance, and it's hard to pin down one main antagonist. But, ultimately, Nefas is the one behind everything, and he's the story's equivalent of a manmade Satan. Nefas is the one controlling Altair, and all of the Hellspawn also take interest in his revival.
-- THERE IS NO FATE. In the end, it's always your final decision.
Yes, my panels do go from right to left, by the way. It doesn't make much sense going left to right here.
As for the shockwave, I just wanted you to see the lines through the wall, because he was still behind it before he took that huge leap. I think I'll color in the part sticking out of the wall, though.
-- THERE IS NO FATE. In the end, it's always your final decision.
Nefas' body iteslf actually isn't the problem so much as the types that clamor for its power, and how it affects them. He's more like a "Mother Brain" than a "Ganon".
-- THERE IS NO FATE. In the end, it's always your final decision.
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I suggest that you color the shockwave behind the "tomp". It's a bit hard to see. Hahahahaha! By the way, who's the main villain? Is it this guy?
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"I'm just a Kamen Rider passing by. Remember that!"
-Kadoya Tsukasa / Kamen Rider Decade
Check out my oneshot manga [link]
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THERE IS NO FATE. In the end, it's always your final decision.
My manga: [link]
My gallery: [link]
As for the shockwave, I just wanted you to see the lines through the wall, because he was still behind it before he took that huge leap. I think I'll color in the part sticking out of the wall, though.
--
THERE IS NO FATE. In the end, it's always your final decision.
My manga: [link]
My gallery: [link]
--
"I'm just a Kamen Rider passing by. Remember that!"
-Kadoya Tsukasa / Kamen Rider Decade
Check out my oneshot manga [link]
--
THERE IS NO FATE. In the end, it's always your final decision.
My manga: [link]
My gallery: [link]
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